Hey Phil, Been noticing your good work. However i felt your "about me" could do with some enhancing. So i just reworked your words and put them down below.Use them if you like it. After all a better model requires better words about him to Stick around !
"Hi everyone, my name is Phil. I am 21 years old and been working out since I was 14! I am in the modeling industry since 17 and signed on some cool big campaigns. I’m lookin’ to make it big and do greater things in life. I love to give back something to my fans here, so some cool workout tips are comin’ your way. Stick around my blog or hit me up at djphil11010@live.com. Use can this e-mail to IM me.
I like the full picture of which this one seems to be a cropping a littler better, although you seem to be a bit closer in this one, and I don't mind that either!
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Hey Phil,
Been noticing your good work. However i felt your "about me" could do with some enhancing. So i just reworked your words and put them down below.Use them if you like it. After all a better model requires better words about him to Stick around !
"Hi everyone, my name is Phil. I am 21 years old and been working out since I was 14! I am in the modeling industry since 17 and signed on some cool big campaigns. I’m lookin’ to make it big and do greater things in life. I love to give back something to my fans here, so some cool workout tips are comin’ your way. Stick around my blog or hit me up at djphil11010@live.com. Use can this e-mail to IM me.
Stick Around…… "
Spoilsport, you edited out the best bit!
Phil,
What a beautiful photo of you and you have a softness too your eyes in this one that is simply stunning. Absolutely wonderful.
Kurt
I like the full picture of which this one seems to be a cropping a littler better, although you seem to be a bit closer in this one, and I don't mind that either!
james
Phil~
Now this is the picture I was referring to, in an earlier post, regardless of whether you show the original or not, I love, love, love this picture.
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